Marie Lavender
has been kind enough to allow me to write an article for her blog called “Writing
in the Modern Age”. My article is called
“Going with the Crowd or Alone.” Here is
the link http://marielavender.blogspot.com/2015/04/going-with-crowd-or-alone-by-rival-gates.html I hope you enjoy!
Sunday, April 12, 2015
Saturday, April 11, 2015
Saturday Excerpt, "Quest"
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At last, Linvin reached in his quiver and found nothing left
to fire. He surveyed the field and found
only two frightened goblins still standing.
They had fallen back to the camp.
The time had come for Linvin to show himself to his enemy and finish the
fight. He threw his bow to the ground
and jumped out of the trees. Fueled by
rage, he armed himself with two swords from the dead goblins and advanced on
the camp.
The sight angered the goblins. It was inconceivable to them
that a lone archer had bested such a force.
They immediately charged at him.
Linvin came to a halt and waited for them with his weapons held
high. One goblin arrived just ahead of
the other and jabbed at Linvin with his spear.
Linvin knocked the blow aside easily with one sword and then came around
with a swipe from his second that struck his enemy’s neck. The creature’s head separated from his body.
Linvin quickly turned his attention to the sole remaining
goblin. Out of the corner of his eye, he
saw a spear thrust aimed for his head.
Linvin instinctively ducked and rolled toward his opponent. When the roll was completed, he found himself
sitting on his rear with his legs before him at the foot of his foe.
Recognizing the close quarters, the goblin abandoned his
spear and drew his sword. In Linvin’s
haste to dodge the spear, he had lost the grip on both of his blades. The goblin raised his arm for a killing blow
on his earthbound enemy.
Linvin used the moment to make a sweeping kick at the
goblin’s knees with his leg. The
desperate blow knocked the goblin on his back and dislodged the sword from his
hand. Linvin reached for the knife in
his boot and dove on top of the warrior. With one hand, he tried to restrain
the goblin’s arm and with the other, he pushed the blade ever closer to his
foe.
The goblin intercepted Linvin’s forearm and held the weapon
away. In a struggle for life, the goblin
used his weight to his advantage and rolled Linvin onto the ground with his
great belly crushing the half elf.
Linvin gasped for air as the blade began to be forced back toward his
body.
Having short arms made it easier for the goblin to maneuver
in the close quarters. Linvin, on the
other hand, was at a disadvantage, not being able to fully extend his arm and
use its strength. If Linvin was to
prevail, he knew he would need to create separation between them.
With a swift move from his leg, Linvin drove his knee into
the groin of his adversary. With
instinctive reaction, the goblin raised his upper body and grimaced in
pain. The move had created the space
Linvin required. He pulled the knife to
the side and broke the goblin’s hold of his arm. Linvin used his full might to drive the
sharpened point through one side of his opponent’s neck. The blade finally stopped when it exited the
other side. Grabbing at its throat, the
goblin fell to the ground. He would not
rise again.
Linvin lay on his back, panting for several moments. He struggled to regain his feet and retrieved
his knife. Linvin stood alone on the
battlefield, victorious. The time had
come to learn the price of his victory.
Wednesday, April 8, 2015
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Tuesday, April 7, 2015
They Go Together
There are a good number of things in this world that go
together. Examples are bagels and cream
cheese, peanut butter and jelly, chips and dip and in a non-food way, a good
book and a blanket. Bagels were an
eastern European staple brought to the new world by the Jewish settlers in New
York. After opening bakeries and delis
they found it needed something extra. An
American product developed from a progression of English recipes was cream cheese. A crafty marketer even called it Philadelphia
Cream Cheese because the best cheeses were said to come from there. It did not matter that the product was made in
New York. When bagels went nationwide,
so did the cream cheese. Next comes
peanut butter and jelly. Peanut butter
was invented in 1880 by Dr. Ambrose W. Straub as a food for his patients with
bad teeth. In 1904 it was taken to the
World’s fair and was an instant hit.
Every sample sold out at a huge profit.
Large wooden tubs began showing up in grocery stores to satisfy consumer’s
demands. In the 1920s and 30s the
national brands you know today were launched.
It wasn’t until World War 2 that invention took over once again. Soldiers were given rations of peanut butter
as a cheap, easily transportable high protein source. They were also given rations of jelly for
their sweet tooth. It didn’t take long
for imaginative G.I.s to put the two together to make the peanut butter more palatable. When they came home from the war, they brought
their new creation back to the American public and the rest is history. Then there was the case of the chip and
dip. It took a long time for these two
partners to come together. Potato chips
were invented in 1853 but didn’t gain much traction in the market until the
1920s when mechanical peeling machines made the product economically
viable. They were introduced in the Deep
South by Herman Lay who had tremendous success.
Around the same time a young Texan named Elmer Doolin had bought
the rights to fried tortilla strips and added an s to the Spanish word for
fried to create Fritos. He sold
franchises after the war and in 1961 the two companies merged into Frito-Lay. Now for the dip part of the story. Lipton had taken the instant soup business as
far as they could. If they were to
remain profitable, they would need a new outlet for their products. They came up with the idea of adding their
dry packaged soup to sour crème and making a product to put your chip in. The trend was an overnight success and soon
dip was made commercially. Even I
remember mixing French onion soup mix with sour cream to make dip. It was a perfect marriage. As hungry as that makes me, nothing compares
to having nothing to do, maybe some rain or snow outside and curling up with a
book and a blanket. I am afraid I have
no history on that as I am sure it has gone on since the written word
existed. It is a comfort and escape you can’t
find anywhere else. So next time you
think of things that go together, sit down with a good book and a blanket. They go together like the song says, ‘like a
wink and a smile.’
Sunday, April 5, 2015
Sunday Excerpt, "Crucible"
“Enough,” yelled Mandrean. “I am in the mood to kill
someone. If Grithinshield is not to be had, I am inclined to settle for you
gentlemen. Now shut your mouths while I think.”
All were silent as Mandrean paced and looked at the pawns.
Then his eyes fell on Gramlick. He sat calmly in his seat with his arms folded.
Mandrean approached him and softened his tone, if only slightly. “You have said
nothing.”
Gramlick looked at the other generals with a look of
disappointment. “To add one’s voice to those of idiots only brands you as one
yourself.”
Mandrean sat beside his mentor. “Well I am asking you, how
will Linvin plan to escape?”
Gramlick patted Mandrean gently on the cheek. “Though you
are my Emperor you are still such a child. You continue to ask the wrong
questions.”
Mandrean withdrew his face and looked at the map in
confusion. “What question should I be asking?”
Gramlick sighed and limped to the center of the room. Then
he turned and addressed Mandrean and the other generals. “You wonder where
Grithinshield will flee. I say you should first ask yourself, ‘Should I pursue
him at all?’”
Mandrean found the statement insulting. “Of course I shall
have him chased down like a rat. Look at what he did today.”
“Exactly,” Gramlick said calmly. “You already listed what
Linvin has accomplished without the Red Sapphire. Now that he has the magic
stone I doubt it will take long for him to master its powers. Even if you do
corner him, you will lose many, many soldiers. Those are the men you are counting
on for your future plans. That would unravel your strategy for Romadon and
possibly open the door for revolt in the newly conquered territories. Even with
horrifying casualties, there is still no guarantee you will beat him. In fact,
his record shows he is always victorious in battle. You would likely throw away
everything and gain nothing.”
Mandrean processed the information and rubbed his chin.
“Then what course of action would you suggest to kill Grithinshield?”
“None,” Gramlick said firmly. “He has what he wants and he
is not coming after you. All he wants to do now is go home. I believe you would
be wise to let him. Further confrontation with Linvin will likely end badly for
our Empire. Let him go and repair the damage caused. He will only be a threat
if he is threatened.”
“But look at what he has done.” Mandrean fumed like a child
not being given what he wanted.
“The damage is considerable,” agreed Gramlick. “It is an
opportunity to rebuild your capital into the regal seat of power it should be.
The greatest scar left today was on your ego. In time that wound will heal like
anything else. Put the anger aside and rise above it. Only then will you be a
truly wise Emperor.”
Mandrean valued his opinion above any other general, but
Gramlick’s suggestion was a bitter pill. The Emperor resumed his pacing at a
hurried rate as he glared intently at the map. His expressions showed the back
and forth debate within his mind. As his track turned to face Gramlick again,
he finally commented in a conciliatory tone. “Your suggestion to allow
Grithinshield to leave my realm unmolested is not an easy choice for me to
make…”
Mandrean was interrupted by a bellowing voice from the main
doorway. “Or the right choice to make either.” Everyone turned to see
Necromancer standing in his customary manner with his arms crossed and covered
in his sleeves. “Forgive me for my tardiness, gentlemen,” he continued.
“Someone had to put out the raging inferno caused by our recent guest and it
would seem I was the only one capable of such a feat. It may please you to know
I saved half of your precious capital. Whether it was the better half or not is
for you to debate. It all looks like a dung pile to me.”
Saturday, April 4, 2015
Saturday Excerpt "Quest"
After taking a moment to collect himself, he looked over the
situation closely. Aside from the
goblins actually in the camp, there were four sentries posted in a square
perimeter around the clearing. They did
not take their eyes off the forest.
Linvin was beginning to seriously regret leaving his sword
at home. If he were going to save his
family, he would only be able to count on his bow. How many could I possibly slay before they
took me in a rush? he thought. Three...maybe
four if I’m fast. That was not a satisfactory answer.
He looked at his uncle lying on the ground and tried to
think of what advice the old elf would give him in the situation. Anvar’s speech at the monument was still
fresh in his mind. Somehow the
sentimentality of the statements was lost on Linvin in the moment. The swelling rage in his heart left little
room for remorse. There was, however,
one useful piece of knowledge from the experience he could put to use. He remembered Anvar’s depiction of the Tree
Line Stand in the war. “Archers in the trees!”
Linvin exclaimed. A plan formed in
moments and Linvin was ready to set it in motion.
He pulled an arrow back on the string and found a spot in a
tree where he could get a good view of the field. For his plan to work, the first shot had to
be true. Linvin took great care aiming,
then let the arrow fly. It sliced
through the air so fast that Linvin lost track of it until it reached its
target.
With a hiss, the arrow went through the neck of the goblin
leader. He gasped for breath and then
fell to the ground. It was a perfect
shot. Not taking time to marvel at his
shooting, he fired two more arrows into the crowd of stunned goblins and then
jumped to the next tree.
Among the goblins, panic had set in like sudden fog. Their captain was down and before they knew
it, two more goblins had fallen beside him.
The sentry nearest to the tree where the arrows came from,
rushed over and thrust his spear into the branches. When he looked up, he saw nothing but
leaves. There was not a sign of anyone. He looked down and saw the boar carcass with
an arrow in its shoulder. Connecting the
two things, he turned to hail his comrades.
The only sound he could make though, was a scream of pain as an arrow
pierced his chest plate. He was driven
to the ground by the sheer shock of the blow.
Spears were held high as the goblins reacted to the cry and
hurried to the sight. The sentries,
however, maintained their posts with surprising discipline. Though an honorable act, it would be their
undoing. The main force was still
running to the first sentry, while Linvin dropped the others in turn with his
stealth attack; hopping from tree to tree like a squirrel.
The hoard halted as they saw their watchmen cut down. Again, panic struck them. In an act of desperation, they spread out and
rushed for different areas of the perimeter from which the arrows might have
come. The act was in vain. Linvin was several trees away before any
goblin came near his last point of fire.
One by one, they succumbed to the bow.
Arrows came from all directions. The goblins could not tell if there was one
enemy or dozens. Whatever direction they
searched, was of no use. Goblins died as
quickly as Linvin could draw his bow.
Not a single arrow missed its target as Linvin channeled his hatred into
the slaughter.
Wednesday, April 1, 2015
If I Were a Billionaire
A friend asked me yesterday what I would do if overnight I
became a multibillionaire. I had the
usual boring answer ready where I pay off my bills, invest for the future and
so forth but then I started thinking.
This is just for fun. What would
you do? I’d like to visit every country
in Europe and not count calories while I’m there. I’d like to buy a car that I can’t afford the
auto insurance on right now. I would buy
a winter home in Florida with an orange tree in the back yard. I would make generous donations to cancer
research, diabetes research and the Heart Association. I would add a wing to my church so everyone
could fit in. I would move my brother
out of poverty in a dangerous part of Detroit and into a home of his
choosing. He always wanted to live on a
farm. Maybe I would buy him a farmhouse. My
other brother and sister would be set up so they would never have to worry
about money again. I would visit them
more often. I would go to Las Vegas not
to gamble but to see every show. I would
pay the Beach Boys to play a concert just for me and my family and friends. I would travel around Australia just so I
could say I had done it. My children
would receive the best educations in the country and I would encourage them and
support them as they became established.
They would not, however, get a free ride. Too many kids have been spoiled by
money. I have good kids and I wouldn’t
want that to change. My wife; my
beautiful wife could have whatever she wanted.
I think what she’d like most would be a maid. If we’re going to go that route then we would
need a mansion big enough to need servants.
We would have house servants and lawn servants and security to keep the
nuts away. I would go to Hawaii and pick
a fresh pineapple. Then I would cut away
the sides and eat it like a popsicle. I’d
hire Megan Fox as my massage therapist…wait a minute. That might not be such a good idea. I’d lose half my money in a divorce. I better hold off on that one. In all seriousness, there are a lot of fun
and different things I could do if I had that kind of money. Do you know what I would most look forward to
doing? Writing. I would write every day if I could. That’s the big answer to the question. I would have my own little world and my
computer. There my dreams would come to life
while my family enjoyed my money. Sure,
I would do some of that but I am a simple man with simple tastes. Let me write and I am happy.
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