It was the 11th hour of the 11th day
of the 11th month in 1918 that the two sides fighting The Great War
agreed to initiate an armistice. In man’s
increasingly efficient ways of killing one another that was going to be The War
to End All Wars. Such a grim declaration
turned out to be little more than wishful thinking. Today is the day we set aside every year to
remember not just that war but every serviceman or woman who sacrificed their physical
health, their mental health, their life, or hopefully just their time in order
to give people like me the opportunity to write what I want when I want. What many do not know is that writers have
gone to war as well. Certainly there
were the Ernie Pyle’s of the world imbedded with the troops as
journalists. What I am referring to
today, however, are the writers we have grown up with who served. The most obvious place to start is Ernest
Hemingway. He joined the Red Cross as an
ambulance driver and was sent to the Italian front in 1918. There he witnessed horrifying carnage of
which he wrote about in his book Death in the Afternoon: "I remember
that after we searched quite thoroughly for the complete dead we collected
fragments". He was later wounded by
a mortar round but still managed to help several Italian soldiers to
safety. For his action he was awarded
Italian Silver Medal for Bravery. He
spent 6 months in a hospital recovering.
J.R.R. Tolkien already had a university degree but joined the British
Army as a lieutenant in the Lancashire Fusiliers in World War One. He was in the Battle of the Somme. After 5 months on the front he came down with
trench fever and was discharged to England where he continued writing. After the war he formed a writer’s group that
included a man with whom he would become good friends. That man he met was my favorite writer of all
time; C.S. Lewis. When the Great War
began, Lewis left his studies at Oxford to enlist in the British Army. He became an officer in the 3rd Battalion
of the Somerset Light Infantry. Like his
later friend Tolkien, Lewis was sent to the Somme. He arrived on September 25, his 19th
birthday. He was wounded in the Battle
of Arras and was sent to England to recuperate.
After he had mended he was stationed there until the end of the
war. He left the army to return to his
writing and academic pursuits in December of 1919. These are only three of the many writers who
have served in times of war. At times
writers are viewed as people who sit on the sideline and criticize. Well these giants in my field all took to the
field and were all wounded in the field.
If such good writers survived the wars, it makes you wonder how many
great ones didn’t?
Tuesday, November 11, 2014
Sunday, November 9, 2014
Sunday Excerpt, "Crucible"
Welcome to prison.
Before them was a corner tower with a black, forbidding
exterior. As they came near, horrible cries and screams crept through vents and
barred windows. It was as if the very rocks were warning them away.
Arrow slits were visible at all levels of the tower facing
out from the walls and in toward the courtyard. Their placement on the interior
was poorly chosen. It appeared to Linvin they were installed there in case of
revolt or some other overrunning of the palace. If that were the case, they
would be of little use. The narrow portals were placed at the edges of the
semicircle where they would not easily be noticed. Such positioning preserved
the powerful presence the builders desired from the tower.
It was clear to Linvin, however, the holes were
afterthoughts insisted on at the end of construction. By placing them for
aesthetics, the slits were woefully insufficient. There were no interlocking
fields of fire for archers. Furthermore, blind spots where no arrows could
reach were numerous. None was as glaring as that around the main double doors.
The area had no protection.
Having seen such structures before, Linvin was unmoved by
the impending doom. His family, however, shook with fear. He tried to calm them
but even Anvar despaired.
The wagon stopped with the door to the cell very near to the
gates of the tower. Goblin Soldiers drew their weapons and donned shields as
they formed two lines from door to door. Between was a narrow path. As if
ferocious beasts were behind the bars, the Captain unlocked the door and then
stepped back as the cage swung open.
Slowly the elves crawled from one cell toward another. There
was really no need for the precautions by the goblins. Linvin and his party
were weakened and sick from hunger on the long journey. The goblins had clearly
heard of their exploits and took no chances.
Stumbling forward, as if sleepwalking, they dragged their
chains along the path and through the door of the tower. The goblins in line
jeered and taunted them with warnings of punishment they would receive inside.
Hanging their heads, the condemned elves shuffled through the doors.
Inside, the bare stonewalls were adorned only by a spiral
staircase leading both up and down. Mounts above sections of stairs held lit
torches. Goblin guards walked back and forth and up and down the stairs. Before
them was a huge round room furnished with a lone desk and chair. Behind the
desk sat what was perhaps the largest goblin Linvin had ever seen. He was
taller than Linvin and easily weighed as much as the four prisoners combined.
Scars peeked through gaps in his chain link armor. On his belt was a whip and
beside him sat a spiked club. Even the approaching goblins escorting the
prisoners were fearful as they drew near. The Captain, however, showed no such
reverence.
“Sergeant Hugon...these are the Elves taken prisoner at the
river crossing,” the Human Captain stated as he dropped a rolled scroll on the
table. “They are not to be mistreated.”
Hugon angrily opened the document and struggled to read its
contents. Then he began to laugh. Moving the parchment over to a lantern on the
desk, he set the orders ablaze. “That’s what I think of your orders. I do as I
please with my prisoners.”
The Captain drew his sword. Hugon stood quickly and took
hold of his club. The other goblins in the tower drew their weapons and rallied
behind the Sergeant. In spite of the insurmountable odds against him, the
Captain held his position.
“I want you to acknowledge that you have taken custody of
the prisoners,” the Captain said with his blade pointed directly at Hugon’s
heart. “You will be accountable for any deviation of the orders from this point
forth.”
The Goblin Master snorted and answered, “I have them now,
Human. Now be about your business. I wouldn’t want you to get your pretty
uniform dirty.”
The Captain looked at the jailor with disdain and sheathed
his weapon. “Goblin scum,” he branded as he turned and left.
Saturday, November 8, 2014
Saturday Ecerpt, "Quest"
Ah, destiny
“Please spare me your destiny talk again, Anvar. I do not
believe in anything that predisposes your actions away from freewill. It was my
choice to go on this quest, it was not predestined.”
“You think so, do you?” asked Anvar. “Think of the steps to
get where we are now. Your father acquired the staff. He sent you to the
perfect place to train as a general and leader of men; the very qualities
needed to make best use of the Red Sapphire. Your father died, prompting your
return at the perfect time to solidify your fortune so that you need not worry
about finances in your absence. You would never have taken up the quest if your
mother had not been killed, making your departure necessary. The assassin did
not gain hold of the staff and key or kill me. That enabled you to take up the
quest.”
“Do you still see no sense of purpose in all of that? All of
those events happened for a reason. You were meant to take up the quest and
find the Red Sapphire. The fact that so many events happened so close together,
leads me to believe that someone else is close to finding it. That someone is
not meant to have it, you are!”
“And what would happen,” Linvin asked, “if the wrong person
found the gem first?”
Anvar shook his head. “It is hard to say, but the end could
not be good. Do you remember your father’s bedtime stories?”
“I remember him telling them to me, but I do not recall the
specifics.”
“Let me tell you the details,” Anvar told him. “The Red
Sapphire has been around since before time began. Whenever evil gained
supremacy in the world, the stone would find a new champion to wield its power.
He would use its power to take up the fight for those who could not defend
themselves.”
“Such magic, could that person dispense, that he could
ravage lands, lay waste to armies and strike down those who would oppress. It
was just as the staff told you, ‘One can save many; one can make all the
difference.’”
“The last time the gem was seen, was at the end of the last
dark age. As you know, there were no written records at the time, but the last
story I heard told, was that the bearer was so powerful that he could even fly!
In the final climactic battle, he used the magic at his command to drop a
mountain on an opposing army, utterly destroying it.”
“A mountain?” Linvin said in disbelief. “That sounds quite
ridiculous.”
“Well,” Anvar said, “if you consider that the stories were
told for hundreds of years, from one fireside to another, there was undoubtedly
some exaggeration. Consider, if only the smallest measure of the stories were
true, the power you seek could affect the course of world events. However, it
may be that the power you seek could be used to serve a darker purpose, with a
different master. Should a person of a diabolical nature gain such power, it
could prove to be the end of our world as we know it.”
“The staff and stone know who they want to use them. They
know that to effectively use that power, the bearer would have to be brave,
powerful, intelligent, pure of heart, and well-schooled in military and world
affairs. Such a man would even need to be wise in the ways of commerce. Through
such a man, the power of the Red Sapphire would be most utilized for the
greater good. How many men can you think of that match all of those criteria? I
can only think of you, my boy.”
“So I ask you, after all that I have said, do you still
doubt that this destiny has been laid before you?”
Linvin rubbed his chin and paused, “But it was ultimately my
choice to go on this quest.”
“Indeed it was,” agreed Anvar. “There will always be a
choice. The doorway may be placed before you, but only you can step inside. It
is what you do with this opportunity that falls into the realm of choice. You
could have chosen to hide from your would be assailants, but you chose to
embrace your destiny.”
“So you are saying that everything happens for a reason, but
I am the one who must figure that reason out and choose to act on it?” Linvin
asked.
Anvar sifted the summation through his mind and said, “That
is correct. Destiny and choice mean nothing without one another. If an
opportunity is there, but you choose not to take advantage, then where are you?
Likewise, if you are prepared and willing to do something, but the opportunity
never appears, then once again you are nowhere. Aren’t preparation and
opportunity coming together the real meaning of luck?
So as a comment about your first statement, it was indeed
luck that we have the staff.”
Linvin seemed satisfied with the answer and asked, “Tell me
what stories you know of the Red Sapphire. Truth or fiction, I do love a good
tale.” Anvar smiled and began to regale him with tales of magic and intrigue.
Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Peep Holes and Phone Calls
Well it’s a balmy 53 degree fall day in Nebraska and both
trees in the state are starting to change color. I freely admit that is an exaggeration but if
you read my blog, you get my point. Just
a quick point that has nothing to do with anything. None of the houses in our neighborhood have
peep holes on the doors. When we built
ours there wasn’t one and we had to pay extra after closing to get one
installed. We live in a very friendly
neighborhood and maybe it comes from all those years of living in Michigan, but
you don’t open the door without looking first.
That just seems like common sense.
Some people have big glass windows next to the doors to look
through. That lets people see into your
house or you have to put up blinds. And
if you look through there, the person on the other side can see you so you can’t
pretend you aren’t home. I would tell my
kids, “If you don’t know who is on the other side of that door and your mother
and I are not around, don’t open it.
Pretend you aren’t home and they’ll leave.” You can’t do that if they see you. It just seems strange. Oh well.
People out here are more trusting.
I should like that. I try very
hard to not be political in my writings but I can say quite firmly that I will
not miss all the political ads and phone calls.
I’m on the “Do Not Call Registry” and I still get political and
telemarketing calls. I can see why so
many people have done away with their home phone completely. They are a pain in the neck and only 1 in 30
calls is actually one I want to take. I
find myself screening every call. Remember
the days before caller ID when you had to wait for the machine to kick on to
find out who was calling? If you wanted
to talk to that person you had to hurry to the phone and pick up. The person on the other end of the line knew
what you were doing. Caller ID makes it
so much simpler to screen. Still, I will
keep my home phone as I have relatives outside the country and the cost of
calling them on my cell phone is prohibitive.
If I recall, it’s about .25 per minute.
Just out of college my best friend entered the Peace Corps. and was sent
to Guatemala. I was poor and just trying
to make it as a newlywed. There I was
explaining to my wife that I was going to be getting and accepting a collect
call from my best friend (another woman) that night and it was going to cost me
$2.00 a minute. For those of you who don’t
remember the days before cell phones or deregulation of the phone company, long
distance charges were ridiculous. My
wife was furious but said I could only spend $20.00. So when my friend called, she had come out
of the mountains down to Guatemala City to find a pay phone in the middle of
the street with cars passing by and people verbally abusing her. When I picked up the phone and accepted the
charges I started by saying, “I can only talk to you for 10 minutes.” Well that ticked her off for 5 of those
minutes and then we were able to say a few words before the alarm on my watch
went off. (Yes, I had a digital
watch.) After I hung up I felt
terrible. My friend was mad at me. My wife was mad at me. And I had just spent $20.00 which was hard to
come by in order to feel that way. I
think of that every time I consider losing my land line. What would it cost if I called Canada? Ouch.
I don’t want to be that guy with the stop-watch again. I think it’s better to stick with my home
phone and deal with the telemarketers.
Tuesday, November 4, 2014
More Scams Out There
I don’t think I would be far off base to say I am very
cynical about the world. It just always
feels like there’s a catch to every good deal.
Today my instincts have been right twice but I am 1 out of 2 in the
listening department. A good friend sent
me an email that simply said, “What’s sup?”
Then there was a link. My internal
alarm went off telling me something was fishy but I clicked the link
anyway. It took me to a pharmaceutical site. Without even reading it, I closed the window
and deleted the email. That was a
foolish thing to do in the first place.
I should always listen to that inner voice. It is almost never wrong. Hopefully the email didn’t infect my computer
in some way or compromise my email contacts.
With any luck, it was just a way to get me to go to their site…but that
little voice is telling me that is wishful thinking. What possesses people to do these
things? Why cause so much grief for so
many people? From my last talk with my
antivirus people it seems nearly impossible to catch these cyber-scoundrels. I can’t understand why that is. Surely they must leave some trail to
follow. As I was beating myself up for
opening that link, I received an email from some banker in charge of a trust in
West Africa worth 9.2 million dollars.
It apparently belonged to a family that was entirely blown up in a
bombing. Here’s the start, “This message might meet you in utmost surprise. However,
it's just my urgent need for foreign partner that made me to contact you for
this transaction. I got your contact from yahoo tourist search while I was
searching for a foreign partner. I am assured of your capability and
reliability to champion this business opportunity when I prayed about you.” Yeah.
Ok. Nothing out of the ordinary
here. I like the part where he says he
prayed about it to give it increased validity because we all know bankers pick
their business partners through prayer.
I pray every day but in this first paragraph I already know I’m not
buying what he’s selling. He wants to
split the money 60/40 with me and to prove I’M ON THE LEVEL he wants me to
forward my personal information to him.
You have got to be kidding me. Do
people actually fall for this? I received
a similar letter about a week ago from West Africa in which the person claimed
to need a foreign partner to help transfer over 4 million dollars to the USA
because it was no longer safe for their church group over there. Wouldn’t they have some sort of parent church
group to call upon rather than contact a complete stranger and promise him half
your money to help with a situation they are completely unfamiliar with? Apparently Ebola makes people want to give
away money. These are such obvious scams
and they appear to be happening with greater frequency. Like I said, I was a fool to click the one
link but I certainly wasn’t going to willingly type personal information into
the computer. I’ve re-learned my lesson. Always listen to that little voice inside
you.
Sunday, November 2, 2014
Exceprt "Quest"
Linvin takes the staff
Linvin was scared. All the gaps in his life had been filled so suddenly. It was only natural that he did not want to accept the answers. Anvar looked down on him with a piercing stare. Finally, Linvin capitulated, “I will go on this quest,” he sighed, as he took to his feet. “If my parents wanted me to go that badly, well, I owe them at least that.”
Anvar, once again, held out the staff. This time Linvin took it from him.
The moment he grasped it, Linvin could feel a force flowing through his body. His senses tingled and in a moment, things became clear to him. He could feel its presence washing over him like a wave. The staff was indeed a living entity. It felt like a best friend, which one had found again. He could finally understand that the staff was ‘meant’ for him.
A voice entered his head though no noise was heard. “At last we are together,” the voice said. “I am the Path of the Red Sapphire. Long have I waited for the chosen one, to come and wield me in his hand. Together, we will find the stone that will complete us both. With it, we will fight for those who cannot fight for themselves. We will prove that one can save many. One can make all the difference and we will strike down the ever-growing tyranny and oppression in this world. You were chosen because you are true of heart and character. Together, we will make the difference no one else can make.”
Linvin felt warmth and satisfaction emanating from the staff. He had never experienced telepathy before and decided to try to send a message back. “How will I know where to look?” he asked. His answer was swift. “I will point you in the right direction.” Linvin’s arm involuntarily extended with the staff in hand and pointed to the north.
“What is it?” Anvar asked while nearly dropping his pipe.
Linvin listened to the staff for a moment and then answered his uncle. “That is the direction we must head, in order to find the Red Sapphire. The staff says it is a very long distance from here.”
“It spoke to you?” Anvar asked with excitement.
“Did you not hear its voice?” Linvin questioned back.
“I heard no sound,” said Anvar. He nodded thoughtfully and bit hard on his pipe. “Do you have any maps around here?” “Yes,” Linvin answered. He quickly went inside and came out with a rolled map.
They spread it out on the floor and examined the area to the north closely. The path set before them was not an easy one. It would indeed be a perilous journey.
Sartan was an ethnically diverse and prosperous kingdom. It lay in an excellent location for controlling vital trade routes. On her northern border, was a dense forest of trees known as the Thornhaven Forest. From there, things became more complicated.
Linvin was scared. All the gaps in his life had been filled so suddenly. It was only natural that he did not want to accept the answers. Anvar looked down on him with a piercing stare. Finally, Linvin capitulated, “I will go on this quest,” he sighed, as he took to his feet. “If my parents wanted me to go that badly, well, I owe them at least that.”
Anvar, once again, held out the staff. This time Linvin took it from him.
The moment he grasped it, Linvin could feel a force flowing through his body. His senses tingled and in a moment, things became clear to him. He could feel its presence washing over him like a wave. The staff was indeed a living entity. It felt like a best friend, which one had found again. He could finally understand that the staff was ‘meant’ for him.
A voice entered his head though no noise was heard. “At last we are together,” the voice said. “I am the Path of the Red Sapphire. Long have I waited for the chosen one, to come and wield me in his hand. Together, we will find the stone that will complete us both. With it, we will fight for those who cannot fight for themselves. We will prove that one can save many. One can make all the difference and we will strike down the ever-growing tyranny and oppression in this world. You were chosen because you are true of heart and character. Together, we will make the difference no one else can make.”
Linvin felt warmth and satisfaction emanating from the staff. He had never experienced telepathy before and decided to try to send a message back. “How will I know where to look?” he asked. His answer was swift. “I will point you in the right direction.” Linvin’s arm involuntarily extended with the staff in hand and pointed to the north.
“What is it?” Anvar asked while nearly dropping his pipe.
Linvin listened to the staff for a moment and then answered his uncle. “That is the direction we must head, in order to find the Red Sapphire. The staff says it is a very long distance from here.”
“It spoke to you?” Anvar asked with excitement.
“Did you not hear its voice?” Linvin questioned back.
“I heard no sound,” said Anvar. He nodded thoughtfully and bit hard on his pipe. “Do you have any maps around here?” “Yes,” Linvin answered. He quickly went inside and came out with a rolled map.
They spread it out on the floor and examined the area to the north closely. The path set before them was not an easy one. It would indeed be a perilous journey.
Sartan was an ethnically diverse and prosperous kingdom. It lay in an excellent location for controlling vital trade routes. On her northern border, was a dense forest of trees known as the Thornhaven Forest. From there, things became more complicated.
Saturday, November 1, 2014
New Book Review
Here is a new book review for "Quest for the Red Sapphire." http://readbookwormread.blogspot.com/
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