While I have been waiting to hear back from my agent about
book 4 in the “Sapphire Chronicles”, (“Repercussions Abound”), I have started
developing characters for book 5, “The Thief Master of Ravensburg”. This is
going to be a radical departure from the first four books. The characters are nearly all different than
the ones you are used to and Linvin is not in it at all! Now, those of you who have followed me for
years are going to say, “Wait a minute, he plans his stories out ahead of time.” That is true but new characters still need to
be developed. That is one of the most
fun parts of writing. Taking a wisp of
an idea and forming it into a full blown person. It is so exciting. Then you get to create scenes that display
this person’s attributes. They interact
with one another to grow them even further.
Then I get to add a new backdrop to the story. The city of Ravensburg is like nothing I have
ever written about before. The geography
of the city is different. The people are
different. And the main characters are
very different. We have thieves, a
blacksmith and a messenger boy to name a few.
There is a strong female character who drives the story as well. If that doesn’t peek your interest, an old character
who became central in “Repercussions Abound” is falsely accused of murder and
must clear his name in order to have any chance of a future; let alone
living. We will be going from the
country to the city and it will leave you speechless. First I must publish the current book but then
the next boo will be ready to write. It’s
hard to wait. In a way it’s like waiting
for your children to be born.
Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Tuesday Excerpt, "Crucible"
On the desk, Linvin found the orders to which the goblins on
the bridge referred. Linvin already knew most of the message. One point of
interest came at the end when instructions were given to shoot a flaming arrow
into the sky if Linvin’s party was spotted. Then they were ordered to retreat
and hide while the ‘main body’ of the army drove them to the sea and would
annihilate them there.
The news was ominous to Linvin. Even if his plan was
successful and they left the depot unnoticed, he was in a race to the sea. If
the Mandrean armies arrived there first, he would be in for a fight he wished
desperately to avoid.
He left the barracks and checked the other three buildings
to make sure there was no one lying in wait for them. Once he was confident the
compound was secure, he left to summon his party.
As Linvin hurriedly strode down the center of the road, the
General in his brain began to formulate a plan with benefits and risks taken
into consideration. Though the walk was short, the time was sufficient for the
decisive leader to crystallize his orders.
When he saw the bridge appear at the end of the road with
the goblins still sleeping upon it, he stopped and called out. “It is safe.
Come to me.” His four companions walked their horses out of the trees and
eagerly waited for news about the depot. Linvin was quick to respond. He put
his arms behind his back and began to pace in front of the others like he was
addressing his soldiers.
“Just ahead there is in fact a small base and storage
depot,” Linvin began. “There are five buildings in the compound. On the left
are a barracks and stable. On the right are three storage facilities. I have
seen to it that the Sergeant on duty there does not wake before the others. He
is sound asleep in the barrack. Do not enter that building.
“Rander, find a branch in the woods that has already fallen.
I do not want evidence of a freshly broken tree limb to raise suspicion. As we
advance, use the branch to grate the soil on the road and hide our tracks. When
those guards awake and return to the depot I want them to believe no one has
been down this road.
“It will be tempting to take our time at the base. We cannot
afford to do that. It is part of their messenger network with a crossroad in
the middle of the compound. We must go in, get what we need and leave quickly
without leaving evidence of our presence. Only then will my plan work.
Sunday, March 27, 2016
Sunday Excerpt, "Quest"
“So you possess the kind of power that Linvin is seeking?”
Rander asked.
“Both are magic,” Anvar answered, “but the difference in the
level of power is beyond compare. It is
similar to comparing a lake to an ocean.
The Red Sapphire will bring Linvin far greater power than I could ever
hope to channel. Aside from the power
the gem harnesses, it also is Red Magic.”
Seeing their reaction, Anvar decided to continue so that he
might answer some of their questions before they formed.
“Magic is very color-specific. For example, I am an orange magician. This means that when I use my power, I
emanate it in an orange color. Among
magicians, there is a hierarchy based on color.
Each color has an opposite, which is equal in power and cancels out its
counterpart. Different pairs of colors
have different strengths as well. The
most powerful magic is either red or blue.
A red magician and a blue magician would not be able to destroy each
other, because their powers are opposites and cancel each other out. However, they can still do harm to one
another, provided the opponent does not block the incoming magic. They simply can’t completely destroy each
other with magic.
“As I said, there is a hierarchy. Red and blue are the most powerful and
rare. No magic can stand against them
when the magician is prepared. The next
tier down of opposites consists of orange and yellow magic. Again, they cancel each other out and are not
as powerful as red and blue. This level
is more common, but still not widely found.”
“The final level is made up of violet and green. It is likely those magicians, you refer to
Rander, being at fairs and the like. Their power is relatively weak. Such places of amusement however, are the
only places where they may display their gifts without being persecuted. Violet and green magicians are the meekest of
the six but also the most prevalent.
While magicians as a whole are rare, there are far more of the lower orders
than the higher ones.”
Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Publishing a Book
Well, it’s done. All
the marketing materials for my next book are finished. That means I can send it to my publisher as
soon as I hear back from my agent. At
long last I will be able to send my manuscript in for editing (somewhere in the
lineup). The next step in the process is
to send it to my agent. She will present
it to the publisher and they will accept or reject it. Since my contract owes them 3 more books, I
think they will accept it. Then they
will put it in line to be published.
When the time comes, several months later, an editor and an illustrator will
be assigned to the book. Then we will
have the back and forth of what must go and what must stay in the
manuscript. It’s like a tug of in a
sense and can be easy or very difficult.
Once the edits are approved we work on the illustration. My experiences have been very good with this
part as the illustrator often sees my vision quite clearly. When that is all done it is sent through to
finishing. Then you are sent you new,
crisp, clean book. Then your work really
begins. You have to promote it. That means appearing on blogs and getting
people to review your book. There might
be contests and if you’re lucky, book signings.
This is your baby. If you don’t
sell it, no one else will.
Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Tuesday Excerpt, "Revenge"
“It would seem that I have chosen a battle I cannot win with
this leg of mine. You do remember the lesson about that,
don’t
you?”
“Yes, school master…Fight no battle you cannot win. It was
the
second lesson you taught me. It followed the one about never
underestimating an opponent. I never forgot.”
“You may not have forgotten, Lad, but you have paid them no
heed.”
Mandrean jerked his head over at Gramlick who knew he had
special privileges at that moment. The emperor’s teeth
ground
together, and his face tightened.
“Tathbar knew the rule and deliberately broke it,” Mandrean
fumed. “And Grithinshield will pay for all the trouble he
has
caused.”
Gramlick’s vision was failing so he paid attention to the
direction of Mandrean’s voice to maintain the illusion of
sight. “I
think you give the Sartanian too much credit. Our troubles
are not
his doing.”
“How can you say that?” Mandrean erupted while coming to
the bedside. “You know what happened. That man humiliated
me.
He destroyed my palace…annihilated my elite guard, crushed
entire legions, and left me for dead in a pool of my own
blood. Oh,
I give him credit. I credit him with creating this foul
climate
throughout the empire. He has wronged me in the worst
possible
ways, and he will pay for it. All will see that no one
betters Lord
Mandrean and lives.
“He must die, to be sure, and his death will renew the
people’s
confidence in me. The army’s morale will improve, and the
impotent group I met with earlier will pour the glory upon
me like
a shower of golden raindrops. Forget the grain. The death of
Linvin Grithinshield will bring me all I desire.”
Gramlick was completely blind by the end of the oration. His
time was short. Mandrean had finally voiced his opinion, and
Gramlick had little time to get his point across.
“Boy. Grithinshield did not make the crops fail or the
conquered territory rebellious or the roads crumble or the
Goblin
Nations fight. You credit the man for too much. His death
will not
solve these problems. Most have forgotten the incident in
the
mountains. The only person keeping this issue alive is you.
You
seek revenge. That is an expensive thing that a wise emperor
knows he cannot afford.”
Mandrean was so self-involved that he paid no heed to the
faltering voice of his mentor. “I will have that revenge no
matter
the cost!”
“Child, you have tried for a year to kill him. How many
assassins have returned—how many soldiers?” Gramlick began
to
shake and start convulsions.
“Stay with me, schoolmaster,” Mandrean pleaded as he clasped
the general’s hand. “I need you.”
Gramlick fought to speak as his body contorted.
“There…is...more you must know. Acreas, Betrimpia and
Necromancer…. Don’t trust them.… They all want you dead for
their own…” Gramlick’s body stopped fighting and collapsed
on
the bed.
Saturday, March 19, 2016
Saturday Excerpt, "Quest"
Rander wanted to run but could not move. He could not look Linvin in the eyes. Instead, Rander looked down and spoke in a
quivering voice, “I don’t believe a word you said. You’re all talk.”
Linvin looked down, noticing Rander’s soiled trousers and
gave a wry smile. “Your body says
otherwise. It's finally time to see
which of you is right.”
As Linvin reached for Rander, Anvar gave a shrieking
scream. “Do not touch him!” Linvin paid no heed. “Linvin!” Anvar yelled again. “Harm him and I am leaving. You must show better control than this.”
Linvin paused, but did not look at his uncle. “He insulted my father and me.”
“For that, you would kill your cousin?” Anvar reasoned.
“It sounds like a good idea at this moment,” Linvin stated
firmly.
“Well, I wish I had brought diapers, because the two of you
are acting like babies.”
“Linvin, how can you gain the Red Sapphire and accomplish all
that you must if you cannot control your temper with a pathetic little parasite
like Rander? You are bigger than
this. Attacking out of anger? Letting pride cloud your judgment? That is not the person the gem wanted. Deep down, the staff knows how good you
are. It takes hard work to be that
man. He is in you. The question is whether you will grow into
the man inside you, or continue to let these petty disputes lead you
astray. If you choose the latter, then
go ahead and kill him.
If you do, though, then I would have misjudged you and I
would leave you immediately.”
Linvin felt the burn of the scathing words in his very
soul. They cut deeply and brought about
shame over his actions. As his head
cleared, he knew Anvar was right. Killing
Rander would solve nothing, though the passionate part of him would argue the
point.
Rander watched Linvin process the information. As the anger dissipated from his cousin, he
smiled and looked to exploit the weakness.
It was at that moment, that Anvar briskly strode over and slapped him
across the face with the back of his hand.
Despite his age, Anvar delivered quite a blow. He repeated the move, this time hitting the other
side of Rander’s face.
“And as for you,” Anvar snorted in the face of his younger
nephew, “were it not for the stench you have doused yourself in, I would put
you over my knee and take a switch to you!”
“I’m too old for that!” Rander fired back. “I am a man now.”
“Then try acting like one!” yelled Anvar. “Inciting Linvin is no way to prove anything,
other than the fact that you are a rotten little child with a death wish. If you are as smart as I actually believe you
are, then you know that Linvin is not your enemy. When things get dangerous on this journey, as
I am sure they will, you will be glad to have him by your side and not opposed to
you.
“As for Linvin’s credentials, I can vouch that all he has
told you is true, but do not ever let me hear comments like that from you
again.”
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
2 Bad Choices
Have you ever been in a situation where no choice was a
winner? No matter what you did, the
outcome would be bad. That’s the
situation my protagonist, Linvin Grithinshield finds himself facing in my
latest book, “Mandrean Revenge.” The
closest person to him in the world is his Uncle Anvar but he has been kidnapped
by the evil Emperor Mandrean and his Necromancer. Linvin is given an ultimatum. He must either surrender to Mandrean for
execution before the first frost or Anvar will be killed. Linvin knows they will kill Anvar anyway but
he feels he cannot abandon his uncle. He
must try to save Anvar. All the advice
he is given is to stay home and not fall for the trap. Linvin knows Mandrean will hold Anvar as
leverage to make Linvin surrender without a fight. Filled with no hope of victory, he sets off
for the Mandrean Empire and his date with destiny. The funny thing about destiny is it never
happens just as you plan. Linvin runs
into all sorts of adventures along the way and his path changes. The story is full of excitement, intrigue, betrayal
and of course, action. This is the third
installment of the “Sapphire Chronicles”.
In the first two, “Quest for the Red Sapphire” and “The Sapphire
Crucible” Linvin, Anvar and the twin cousins Bander and Rander first meet up
with the Mandreans when they are looking for the Red Sapphire. There is plenty of action to be had and
lessons to be learned as Linvin becomes worthy of the gem and its power. Now it seems in the third book, Linvin is
paying for any successes he had earlier.
So the question remains, what would you do if you were him?
Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Tuesday Excerpt, "Crucible"
Though his eyes were captivated by the luminance of the
stone, Mandrean’s mind felt a resurgence of energy he hadn’t felt since he
served in the army. The energy sparked the most diabolical and wicked parts of
his character. He felt a bond with the gem like an appendage that was missing
and had been reunited. Evil thoughts of murder and conquest raced to his
consciousness. At long last, he had the power to reform the world, as he
wanted.
As the others in the room collected themselves Mandrean cast
a cunning glare at the map, which had been left unobstructed by furniture or
people. His eyes glazed over as a frenzied speech left his lips.
“Romadon will fall with ease. Let the Goblin Nations dare to
interfere. I will leave their bones for the buzzards. Sartan is weak and
unprepared. They too will fall with ease. Valia and the countries to the east
will beg for mercy before the end. They will get no such satisfaction. Those
who survive the slaughter will be my slaves building the Empire to which I am
entitled.
“However, before my plans can be put into action, I must
find and kill that weakling half-elf who escaped my clutches today.”
“He burned your capital and nearly killed you,” Necromancer
added. “Remember?”
“I remember,” Mandrean said firmly. “His tale is about to
end. Necromancer, I can feel the power of the Blue Sapphire but sense no way to
use it.”
The Magician answered, “The gem said it would give you the
power through the Path of the Blue Sapphire. I told you one use of the staff
Linvin carried was to find the chest. The other seems to be as a conductor of
the stone’s power. In order to use the full power of the Blue Sapphire, you
would need to insert it in the afore mentioned Path of the Blue Sapphire, or
Blue Staff.”
“Alright then,” Mandrean acknowledged. “Where is the Blue
Staff?”
“I have no idea,” Necromancer answered plainly. “You have
had us searching for the Red Staff and key for the chest. The Blue Staff could
be anywhere. When you consider how long it took to find the Red Staff, it could
be some time before we locate it, if ever.”
“Then I have all this power in my hand and I cannot even use
it!” Mandrean screeched.
Necromancer held out his palms in an appeasing manner and
said, “Let me think for a moment.” He looked closely at the Blue Sapphire and
rubbed his chin. “I believe I could create a substitute until the real staff is
discovered. It would allow you to harness most of the gem’s power and still be
an even match for Grithinshield.”
“An even match?” the pompous Emperor roared. “I will be more
than that. I will crush his throat with my very boot. How long will it take you
to fashion the device for me to use the gem?”
Again Necromancer rubbed his chin and looked at the Blue
Sapphire. “I would say it would take about two days. After that, I can explain
to you how to use its power.”
“You can teach me on the road,” Mandrean replied. “Go to
your work area and commence construction immediately.”
Sunday, March 13, 2016
Sunday Excerpt, "Quest"
“Is something wrong?” he asked. Linvin’s face was red and his eyes stared
fiercely at his uncle.
“Why did you not tell me we were goingthere?” Linvin
demanded. Anvar sighed. “Just hear me out,” he pleaded with his palms
outstretched. “I did not originally plan
to go there, but when I found out we were headed this way anyway, I realized it
was a good opportunity to get some help that we could trust.”
Linvin fumed, “Help?
Trust them?”
“They are family,” Anvar implored.
“Family does not treat one another as they have treated me!”
Linvin snarled.
“Linvin, much time has passed and you are all adults
now. Do you not see that the odds of
either one of us returning from this quest are low? Two extra swords will double our chances.”
“They will double our chances of being stabbed in the back!”
corrected Linvin.
Now Linvin could see why Anvar held back the
information. Had he known where they
were headed, Linvin would not have come.
“So you just expect me to forget about all the years of
fighting with them?” Linvin yelled as he pointed down the road. “All the comments they have made! All the vile things they have done to my
parents and me! You are asking me to
forgive those who terrorized my childhood.
You are asking me to forgive those who would never forgive me.”
Anvar put his hand on Linvin’s shoulder and replied softly,
“Yes I am,Linvin. I am asking you to be
the bigger man. I am asking you to look
at the bigger picture and let go of your hate.
I am asking you to offer them your hand in peace, knowing full ~ 202 ~
well what has transpired between you. Like it or not, you need them. The master of the Red Sapphire will need to
know how to swallow his pride for the greater good.”
“What you ask is not as simple as blowing out a candle,”
Linvin stated as he looked into the distance to disguise a tear. “They never gave me a chance. I was never treated fairly. You were there. Do you not
understand why I hate them?”
Wednesday, March 9, 2016
Odd Questions
Today is a question day.
I just have some questions swimming around in my head. My first question is: why do all people look
better in sunglasses. Have you ever
noticed that? I am not photogenic but in
the few pictures I feel I look good in I am wearing sunglasses. You can look at celebrities or normal
people. If there is a picture of them
with and without sunglasses, they always, always, always look better in the
shades. Why is that? It was a point brought up to me by a friend
years ago about Billy Joel. She said she
thought he was handsome, but only when he wore his sunglasses on stage. Therefore I have decided to name this the “Billy
Joel Effect.” Are we intimidated by
other people’s eyes? Back in school I
took a Persuasion class. (Yes, it’s a
class.) One of the things I learned was
that humans are subconsciously attracted to wide eyes. That is the reason turning down the lights in
romantic situations is so effective. If
I extrapolate, it could be said that the Billy Joel Effect is caused by what
look like big eyes. I admit it’s a
stretch but it’s the best answer I could figure out. Next. When
you fill out an application for something and it asks what sex you are, it
usually says it doesn’t have any bearing on the result. If that is so then why do they ask the
question? If it doesn’t matter that I’m
a man, then why go there? There must be a
quota or government benefit we aren’t told about. It just seems like an odd question if it has
no meaning. Moving on. Can anyone describe that new car smell? Why is it so intoxicating? Admit it.
When you get in a new car at the dealer the first thing you do is
breathe in deeply. That smell just makes
you want to take the car home. A friend
who sold cars told me they actually spray that scent in the cars. So what is it? Is it some pheromone attracting us on a subconscious
level? Perhaps it triggers an effect of
excitement? Whatever the smell is, it is
there on purpose and I can’t even describe it to you. Lastly, when you’re out for dinner, why do
women go to the bathroom together? Men
NEVER go to the bathroom together. I
wrote a paper in college hypothesizing that there is actually a bar in the lady’s
room and tables for massages. After all,
I don’t go in the lady’s room so I don’t know.
There could be a whole different world in there men don’t know
about. Or maybe they just want to talk
about us. I like the bar idea better.
Tuesday, March 8, 2016
Tuesday Excerpt, "Revenge"
Linvin placed his hands on his hips and surveyed the view.
Ascending stands rose on the right and left of him holding
the
elected assemblymen. King Trigonan sat impatiently on his
throne
before Linvin and was the first to speak.
“Good day to you, Lord Grithinshield. Or should I say, ‘good
evening’? I am told you kept me and this entire body waiting
while
you counted your money. Is this so?”
Linvin chuckled with no sign of intimidation and responded,
“As with all lies and hearsay, there is a morsel of truth to
your
statement. I was managing a conflict within my company, and
the
parties took longer to settle their differences than I had
expected.
My tardiness in no way reflects my respect for you or this
body. If
I have offended anyone in this great room, I am truly sorry.
Should
you wish it, I will take leave of you and set another
appointment
whenever I happen into town again.”
The king’s expression changed from mild anger to frightened
alarm. “There is no need to reschedule, Lord Grithinshield.
We
were merely eager to seek your council on some matters.”
“Then, by all means,” Linvin said as he moved closer to
Trigonan. “Let us talk. I see that you have decided to
increase the
size of the army as I had suggested. Have you settled on a
troop
level?”
The king looked to his advisors and then answered, “There is
not a set number in mind, but we want to be prepared in case
we
need to summon our militia if war arises.”
“Militia,” Linvin repeated with repulsion. “Do you mean to
tell
me you have purchased arms for an army you have not and do
not
intend to raise?”
An anonymous voice from one of the stands cried out, “Armies
cost money and are of little use unless there is war. They
simply
drain the treasury. What is your complaint, Grithinshield?
You are
being well paid. Isn’t that what this was all about?”
Linvin glared angrily at the boisterous mob. “Once again it
seems my words are misunderstood. The Mandreans are a
significant threat to our national security. Militias
carrying even
the finest weapons are no match for trained legions. Did you
not
heed my warning two years ago?”
Trigonan raised his hand to silence the assembly. “Lord
Grithinshield, this room took your words most seriously when
you
were last here. In the time since, we have taken measures to
assure
our continued safety from the Mandrean threat.”
Linvin produced the staff holding the Red Sapphire and stood
at
attention. “Exactly what steps have you taken?”
The king looked nervously at his cabinet and then spoke.
“Aside from the afore-mentioned arms buildup, we have begun
paring down Thornhaven Forest.”
Linvin’s eyes widened at the utterance. “Exactly how much
have you ‘paired down’ the forest?”
King Trigonan stood tall with his hands behind his back and
spoke as he paced before his throne. “We have created a
highway
wide enough to march two-hundred men abreast straight into
the
Unclaimed Territory. The forest is no longer a barrier for
us.”
“Or them,” fumed Linvin. “The very fact that Thornhaven was
virtually impenetrable to an army was what saved our nation
the
last time we tangled with the Mandreans. Now you clear a
road
they could easily use to invade Sartan. And rather than
train an
army of sufficient size to protect us, you plan to rely on
militia?”
Sunday, March 6, 2016
Sunday Excerpt, "Crucible"
Necromancer once again hovered down the makeshift hallway
toward his seat. “I only did so at the request of his Eminence. As you know, I
cannot refuse his commands. Still, you are right. I did destroy the doors to
free our beloved Emperor after that scoundrel Grithinshield imprisoned him in
his own throne room. After that I had nothing to do with Linvin grating the
Imperial Standard in the hall, destroying that beautiful staircase, killing all
those soldiers, skewering the Head Jailor, freeing the Princess of Romadon,
demolishing the top of the tower and torching our Capital. No General, I cannot
take credit for those acts. Oh, by the way. If you intend to send any messages,
I would wait. It would seem our former guest ran off the horses at the message
depot and killed the guards.” The smug sorcerer quietly sat on his small,
backless chair.
Necromancer’s comments refueled the fire burning inside
Mandrean who stormed over to address his servant. “You have questions to answer
here as well.”
In his usual sarcastic tone Necromancer answered. “As
always, I am at your disposal.”
“Why did you not tell me the Red Sapphire would not serve
me, but it would kill me if I touched it with so much as a finger?” Mandrean
demanded. “Perhaps you wanted me dead? Maybe that was your plan all along? That
would suit your purposes well, would it not?”
Necromancer casually raised a hand and waived it in his
master’s face as if the notion was laughable. “Come now Most Magnificent One.
You know I cannot do you harm in any way. I also cannot lie to you.”
“You did lie to me.”
“I did no such thing,” Necromancer corrected. “I read on the
chest the Red Sapphire resided within its right side and its master would have
incredible power. You insinuated from those statements you could be its master.
Nowhere in the writings did it say only Linvin could wield the gem. There was
no lie in my statements.”
“Perhaps not,” Mandrean retorted. “I sense an omission of
the full story in your details.”
Necromancer changed the subject as he looked at the pawns.
“Just how do you plan your revenge against Linvin for his crimes against you,
My Emperor?”
Saturday, March 5, 2016
Saturday Excerpt, "Quest"
Linvin was astounded at Anvar’s condition. “You are unaffected by the Racik?”
“On the contrary,” Anvar explained, “I could tell from the
first sip that the drink was more than I could handle.”
“But I saw you drinking all night,” Linvin protested.
“Indeed you did,” Anvar answered. “You saw me drinking water. Newminor was so preoccupied with you that he
took no notice of me dumping his liquor and refilling my cup with water. I see that you took a similar approach to the
evening’s festivities.”
Linvin nodded. “He
was far too sharp of an individual to match wits with in an altered state.”
“He was sharp,” Anvar agreed, “but I did not trust him. His blatant attempt to intoxicate the group made
me suspect that he had an unseen motive.
That motive had become quite clear with the sunrise.”
“He was clearly a thief,” Linvin recounted, “but I cannot
help but wonder if there was more to his charge than he told. What if he was sent to get the key?”
Anvar stretched and then searched the saddlebags for some
pork. “As odd as it sounds,” he began,
“I believed him. The key was the only item of value he could find to take. He admitted to being a thief, and I think
there is little more to his story.
Besides that, with our sentry performing a lackluster job, he could have
easily returned in the night and stolen it again or even killed us all. He did neither. By the moonlight, your heart told you to set
him free. Why would the sunlight tell
you differently?”
As opinionated as ever, Anvar restored Linvin’s faith in his
decision to spare the gnome. Deep in the
recesses of Linvin’s mind, he held an unwilling admiration for Newminor. The gnome was a person who said what many
others may have thought but would not dare to speak. Instead of following the herd, he struck out
on his own without a heading. Rather
than fret about the future, he viewed it with anticipation. Such a carefree existence pushed Linvin
beyond admiration into the realm of envy.
Wednesday, March 2, 2016
Who Gets Credit
Something I have never understood are credits for
creating the arts. Books are nice and
simple. X person wrote the book and Y
did the illustrations. Then Z came along
and published it. Nice, clean and
simple. Everyone knows where they stand
and what piece of the pie they get at the end of the day. Movies are all together another thing. They often say “Based on the novel by X.” I think they do that to remind people how
simple the process was before they started.
I always watch Marvel movies to the end of the credits for the secret
extra scene. When you sit there and
watch how many people are involved in making the movie it makes your head
spin. By the way, what is a ‘Best Boy’
anyway? It sounds like a good job. But why aren’t there ‘Best Girls’? I’m sure there’s a story behind it that’s not
nearly as entertaining as the ones I can think of for the title. Getting back to point, it is amazing how many
people get credit on a movie. If someone
ate a bagel in the corner on the set, he’s probably listed under ‘Bagel Eater’. Music is still another animal. They give less credit than is deserved. You will like a song and it will give credit
to one person for writing it. So they’re
saying that one person wrote the words, the drum piece, the guitar, the bass
and the keyboards for that song? Who is
this guy? He’d have to be a musical
genius. There are a few people who can
actually do all that but I emphasize the word FEW. Most of the time someone wrote the words and
maybe a bit of the music. Then a band
filled in the rest of the song. Why don’t
they get any credit? Think of all the
songs with guitar solos and the guitarist is not listed in the credits. Surely he wrote at least that piece. Why does he not get credit for his
labors? Take the song, “November Rain”
by Guns N Roses. Axl Rose is given full
credit for writing the song. There are,
however, 2 guitar solos within that were clearly written by their lead
guitarist, Slash (I didn’t make up the names).
Even with a ‘thank you’ in the credits, his name is not listed as a
writer and so his royalties will not be forthcoming. Does that sound wrong to anyone else? Music has different rules. I’m glad I write books. Everything else is too complicated.
Tuesday, March 1, 2016
Tuesday Excerpt, "Revenge"
Necromancer had seen the room many times before and was not
impressed. “First you disturb my work with that imbecile you
sent
to fetch me,” he called out. “Then I come all the way
over here to
find out just what insignificant thing has you disturbed,
and you
are hiding in steam you created yourself. Waste no more of
my
time, Master.” He turned to leave.
“I don’t believe I like that tone of voice,” said a man
through
the mist. The sounds of water sloshing back and forth in a
bath
echoed through the room.
“What difference does my tone make?” Necromancer barked.
“No one said I am required to be polite to you. Now get on
with
your reason for bringing me here.”
“Come closer.”
Necromancer drew nearer to the voice until its origin came
into
view. In the largest bath of all sat a man of great size
being washed
by several female servants in the water and out. In all,
there were
six of them cleansing the man.
Though a broad man, he did not appear extraordinarily
muscular. He had perhaps 10 years, several inches and many
pounds on Linvin. The weight was not well distributed. It
concentrated in his belly, which was decorated with stretch
marks.
A large and hideous scar highlighted the region. It was
indeed
Lord Mandrean the 13th.
“Are you sure you have enough women to bathe you?”
Necromancer asked sarcastically.
“Actually, one of my servants is not here. She is with
child. But
the baby will be here soon. It will not be long before she
returns to
my service.”
“I’m sure she would be moved by your excitement at becoming
a father…again. Your concern for her is indeed moving. And
your
Grace continues to demonstrate his concern by bouncing back
quickly from such a troubled heart.”
Mandrean was visibly angered by Necromancer’s attitude
toward the transgression. He gestured for his bathers to
leave and
spoke once they were gone. “You are a fine one to lecture me
on
such things. My concubines mean as little to me as all of
humanity
does to you. I will forgive your insolent tone for I have
business to
discuss,” Mandrean sneered.
Necromancer found the statement to be humorous in the way
one would when being scolded by a witless child. He did not
point
that out, however, as he chose his battles wisely and saw
nothing
to gain from an exchange of barbs.
“What can I do to be of service, Sire?”
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